Negative Specter

[Emily]

Base Ability: Negative Zone: A field of Negative magic surrounds a large area, making certain magics difficult to cast, and others suppressed. The canceled or suppressed magics are searching magic's, Magic that allows one to seek another person. Another type is Enhancement magics, which are only suppressed by a small amount. The field makes a Gray tone to everything, as color seems to drain, only a few colors remain Black, Grey, white, and Dark colors like Navy blue and Brick Red. Has a effective zone of 150 feet. is active for only 5 posts
Base Ability Cool Down:10 posts(limit of only 3 uses per topic)

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Tier One
1st Skill: Freeze- This ability makes movement harder on the target, making it harder to Run and to make quick movements unless the character is naturally fast. Frost aligned( active target) Can be used only though the Negative zone.
2nd Skill: Negative aura- this ability is able to cut the effectiveness of slowing magics of the user. Only by a minor amount his usual speed( a Minor amount) Passive/Aligned Nothingness
3rd Skill:Frost touch- allows Xern to place a tracer mark on a target
4th Skill:Ice shot- A ability that shoots a orb of ice at a target, that shatters and puts a tracer enchantment on the target hit allowing for the target to be traced though a 100 foot radius of Xern. Goes inactive when they leave the radius
5th Skill:Tracer enchantment- Allows the user to place a tracer rune on a item which allows them to trace the target in a large radius(100 feet)

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Tier Two
1st Skill:Stealth enhancement- allows the user to become harder to detect with natural perception. This means that Being able to see him as he walks though the crowd is harder.
2nd Skill: Tracers mark- an ability that allows the user to trace a target long distances, but not between worlds. More accurate than the tracer enchantment.
3rd Skill:Trackers sense- The user gains the ability to see things happen after it has happened, allowing them to track a target easier. Takes 16 posts to recharge and lasts for only 8 posts.
4th Skill:Vanish- using Nothingness, he can erase his being from a picture, or a image that some has of him with something else of close appearance, or another person.

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Tier Three
1st Skill:Negative Step- using nothingness, the user can make his steps almost unheard of.
2nd Skill: Negative space- the user casts a spell on himself making it so he appears translucent and difficult to see.
3rd Skill:Negative enchantment- can make a item appear translucent for a limited time.

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Tier Fourth
1st Skill: Frost Nova- A Forceful blast of ice, that Cause a crater of Ice to form, takes a week to recharge.
2nd Skill:Ice shield- Making a coating of ice around the target, a heavy blow can be absorbed before shattering the Ice like skin.

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Tier Five
1st Skill:Negative wipe- Can change His appearance in someones veiw to something of a regular nobody person

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[Marigold Darkson]

Since you're starting at Tier 1, I'll only grade up until the Tier 1 list of abilities.

Negative Zone: Please be aware that you are in fact suppressing Magic and nothing that's supernatural based, meaning that if anyone has a buff or tracking skill that is used through their skill-tree (which is entirely supernatural), your own negative zone won't be able to affect it. Lastly, rather than giving this a 24 hour cooldown (which is equal to a whole topic, if I were to rule it), I'd suggest you'd just make it an Aura. Should you choose to do so, I want you to give a numeric value on how large an area you're trying to affect. Please know that at Tier 1, the largest you can go is 150 in feet. They also can't be toggled (meaning that it's constantly on during the battle no matter what). If you do choose to have an Aura of any sorts, you are limited only to one and you cannot be immune to auras or their effects. Lastly, if you decide not to make this an aura, but a skill you can use, then it has to have a limit for how long its activated.
Tier 1:

Freeze: How is this ability utilized? Is it a product of the negative space? If so, then this skill will only be applicable, if a person is within your sphere of influence, but if they leave, then their speed will go back to normal.

Negative Aura: You can only choose between your base ability as being an aura, or keeping this skill as one. You can't have both. Given that you are tier 1, the most you'll be able to cut the effectiveness down would be a low amount, or rather, 1 actual post.

Frost Aura: Once again, you can only have one type of aura, so pick between these three and then change the rest.

Ice Shot: This needs a cool down of 2 posts and you won't be able to track the person anywhere in the world, at Tier 1. At most, you'll be able to track them within the immediate 100 feet of your being. I will also let you know that this will scale off of your AGI (Agility stat) and so, for every tier you level up in Agility, you're given a bonus 25 feet.

Tracer Enhancement: This needs a cool down of 2 posts. Also, if a person has an immunity or spell that makes tracking them impossible, you won't be able to track them, so keep that in mind.

[Emily]

Bumb~

[Marigold Darkson]

Base Ability: You are only allowed 150 feet, you cannot square it. We don't use hours or anything like that to determine cool downs or durations, but posts instead. Just say that this can last for 10 posts after activation, or something along those lines. Also, the cool down on the ability follows the same rule and say it can only be used three times in one topic.

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Tier One:

Freeze: How are you trying to make this move work? Is it a targeted skill, an aura, or what?

Negative Aura: We don't use percentages on site. Just stick to saying "a Minor amount," and you're fine.

Ice Shot: This will go inactive if they leave the radius of your ability, not just the world.

[Emily]

Bump~

[Marigold Darkson]

Tier One:
Freeze: You're still not explaining how this ability is slowing down the opponent. Is it doing this through the Negative Zone when it's up, or...?

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Tier Two:
Tracker: Change the duration and cool down, to fit the post system of the site.

[Emily]

~Bloop

[Marigold Darkson]

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